These glasses are beatiful there are diferent colors, black, withe, red, blue. green, brown and orange.
These glasses are better quality than those in other shops.
These glasses have the modern design with antireflex effect, this effect can help you with the light of the sun or computers.
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Hi Zuri,
Good paragraph. Here are some ideas to make it even better:
glasses
beautiful
white
this - singular; these - plural.
Since glasses is plural, use these.
than there are - change to than those in
Punctuation changes:
Put a period after beautiful.
after effect, put either . or ,
Wow que bonito! espero siempre seas tan brillante como lo eres hasta ahora besos... vivillo
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